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Shall We Dance


Tonight is the last night to feel
the music, playing a sensual swaying melody
I catch your chameleon eyes aglow
across the room in this smokey dim lit gloom
Shall we dance?

I walk ever so slowly towards you
the moment, now is the time love
I grasp your beautiful hands, entwine
my fingers with yours, let's hold each other
Shall we dance?

You move with me as if we
were one, gliding along, bodies meshed tightly
I feel your heart beating wild
against me as we hold onto this last chance
And we dance.

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  • Confusedboy
    October 10, 2008
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    Yes by all means, lets dance. lol.


  • Topaze gold member
    September 25, 2008
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    Very nicely done, thank you for this fine entry in the contest.