Hurry feed, hurry write
hurry wash life by:
into future dreams of R&R
rest and relaxation, not
Never comes in tattered dreams
over ruptured paper work, galore
bosses boggled, be he important or not
he holds your lively-hood,
teacher, teacher I don't have my work
essay's away, sunk is my life,no I will finish
stress is ticked into carved scares,
so big the job, where do I start:
do I start here,
no maybe with a Once upon a time...
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Hurry feed, hurry write,
hurry wash life by:
into future dreams of R&R,
rest and relaxation, not
Never comes in tattered dreams
over ruptured paper work, galore
bosses boggled, be he important or not,
he holds your lively-hood,
teacher, teacher, I don't have my work,
essay's away,
sunk is my life, no I will finish
stress is ticked into carved scares,
so big the job,
where do I start:
do I start here,
no maybe with a Once upon a time...
A contest entry
- Complete Stress (quickie) by jocelynclaire.
300 points, ended September 29, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Interesting entry, I feel the "total stress". You've left room for editing, which is crucial for the second part of the contest. Very nice.
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very nicely penned
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