Lounged in balloon whispers
I heard you spoke, frazzled words
haunted in Halloween customs
hurt is beyond a night fright,
Take me away with nakedness
away from pain and I will love,
silence inside ridged ribbons
whisper bloke thoughts, I hurt
That is your plight for me,
dig deep for I feel your weight-
pounded inside heart-beats away,
you sunk to hells wither in existence
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A contest entry
- Make Me Feel Again.... by PerfectImperfection.
900 points, ended October 14, 2008, 31 entries
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I too really enjoyed that last stanza. This is an off beat piece, abstract in its emotion, in way of relating to the pain ... Thank you for your entry & best wishes in the contest!
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That is your plight for me,
dig deep for I feel your weight-
pounded inside heart-beats away,
you sunk to hells wither in existence
Like that stanza alot. I also like how you describe it as "balloon whispers". That's certainly a unique way of saying it
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