Flames of Passion rise
as we look in each others eyes
and the dance begins.
Sweet smell of jasmine fills the air
my body and soul tonight I bare
to you my sensual lover.
Candles burning brightly
as you touch my body lightly
exploring this love so new.
As our hearts beat
we feel complete
as we become one.
Our lips meet for our first kiss
both of us waiting so long for this
our first meeting.
Your fantasies I will bring true
but tonight is long overdue
as I bring my lips to yours.
Our tongues begin the dance
of a lover's romance
and I melt into you.
Your hands caress my breasts
on my nipples they do rest
as you massage them gently.
I feel your cock begin to rise
pressed firmly against my inner thighs
and I exhale deeply.
Make love to me please
as you slide in with ease
and I become forever yours.
We make love for an hour
our bodies we each devour
as we explore each other.
We love each other all night long
what's felt between us can't be wrong
I don't want to let you go.
Leave your side, never
I want to stay this way forever
In the Flames of Passion.
Author notes
Written for my wonderful AP husband who inspired the title - Thank you Carl
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Stimulating
...and deserving
Time for a cold shower
Vito
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Sweet..
This was an extremely romantic piece.
Light and fragrant as a spring rain.
You're sensual and passionate with a
flavor for the tender loving and affectionate.
I was quite intrigued by your reflection
of love flames of passion. Very nice indeed
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So steamy and yet just subtly romantic, in a way that cannot help but touch the inner heart. Beautifully put.
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Wonderful write ... very seductive yet still maintains class... bravo
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Wow that's hot,love it babe,and thank you.
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You are quite welcome!!! It was a pleasure to write!
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Inspirational....
anyone got a match??
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