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~My Love For You~

My love for you is unconditional
My love for you is real
My love for you is something
So incredible to feel

Holding you on those summer nights
Feeling your soft kiss with the sun
My love for you is something
That never once had to be won

I love you with the passing days
And with those we have not seen
You are the one in all my thoughts
In all my living dreams

You are the one whose hand is in mine
Whose lips I can't ignore
You are my life, my world, my love
You're all that I adore.

By:JRC

Author notes

Well Jenn this is what i came up with i'm hoping it's what you were looking for..i love you tons and tons.
Love Always,
Jarrod
Written January 23rd, 2004

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  • bethany may
    May 22, 2004
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    that is so sweet....don't take this to harshly but you write like a girl...and I must say that is so awesome....and really sweet....great poem....keep writing....Luv Caz


  • PrettyRagDoll
    February 1, 2004
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    Oh my. This is so filled with adoration and affection that it is obvious you guys will be together forever. This poem simply expressed your love, true love. It was so beautiful.


  • finding myself 84
    January 23, 2004
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    Aww when I saw this it brought tears to my eyes. You guys are so wonderful together. I wrote a poem for you both as well, if you get the chance why don't you take a look at it! I hope you like it! Luv ya *sonya*

  • Faithcomesin
    January 23, 2004
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    I love this poem and I hope u win. U did extremely well on this. Keep it up. Luves ME

  • Jenn Lynn
    January 23, 2004
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    Baby, that was so sweet! Thank you so much! I love you in more ways than I can explain...
    Love always and forever,
    ~*Jenn

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