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Karl, Shall We Dance

Darling, listen to the music
They're playing our love song
Karl, shall we dance around the floor
Take me in your arms, where I belong

Let's snuggle oh so closely
Dancing cheek to cheek
I can give you a kiss or two
I'll do it ever so sleek

Let's show off our brand new step
The beat of the music is just right
Twirl and swing me around the room
Our feet move ever so light

Thank you darling for the dance
It was wonderful just to be
Snuggled cheek to cheek with you
So all eyes know you belong to me

Author notes

#8 Shall We Dance, Hope you don't mind my using your name Karl

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  • mcheadle
    September 25, 2008

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    A dance of delight

    I hope it was. With nights like this you just wish the moon would hold still so one could dance all night long...mac


  • Harlequin Dance
    September 25, 2008

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    I love poems about dancing. This was a pretty good one. The flow of the poem seemed a bit choppy, but overall nicely done


  • Topaze
    September 25, 2008

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    Very nicely done Katie, very nicely done for the prompt. Thank you for this fine entry in the contest.


    • Katie Lazette
      September 26, 2008
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      Thank you Karl for the Bronze trophy and you comment. It was a joy to enter your contest.