From the moment that I wake up
And the sun shines in my eyes
I know of today’s achievements
And hope I'll never die
To be with you is great joy
As we dance in the sun
I hope we can keep on going
Until the day done
For...
Only Love lasts forever
Only Love lasts its true
Only Love lasts forever
And the one I love is you
And then a little bit later
We stroll around in the park
And name all the birds we hear
And I can hardly wait to start
And then when it’s lunchtime
I sit and eat at home
But from the moment that I met you
I never wanted to be alone
For...
Only Love lasts forever
Only Love lasts its true
Only Love lasts forever
And the one I love is you
And as I lay on my bed
I feel like it’s meant to be
I feel like I’ve always know you
You fill me up with glee
For...
Only Love lasts forever
Only Love lasts its true
Only Love lasts forever
And the one I love is you
A contest entry
- Lurve by Baisi.
600 points, ended September 27, 2008, 13 entries
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745 points, ended October 4, 2008, 73 entries
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525 points, ended November 15, 2008, 66 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your Best Three Pre-writes by piccola.
800 points, ended November 27, 2008, 140 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
Comments
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I can almost hear the music. This will make a great song someday. thank you so much for entering
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This is such a sweet poem. It was written with such love. I am sure the other half you wrote about would enjoy this poem as much as I did. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest
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So pretty and sweet. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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Your words ring with truth, without love, life is not worth living.Thanks for sharing.
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This is amazing, it tells of a mix between infatuation, lust, and love.
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Love
the joy of young love when the hearts beats are truly felt. Oh what a shame that as we age it is so hard to hold on too. Perhaps this could be a song.
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I second lostangel07's comment. This was very sweet and it made me smile!
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this is beautiful...it make me smile
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