Blinded behind clouds,
land,
my own thoughts
where are you?
I touched you once
but now I have to wait
not sure when
do not want to say "if"
our eyes will hold each other again
many miles apart
we are both in tears
you feel them trickle down your face
mine are dry for now
I can barely breathe
alone for now
one day i will knock on your door
and we will walk side by side
and our fingers will melt together.
Author notes
attempting a contest..hmm.
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel Again.... by PerfectImperfection.
900 points, ended October 14, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A soft piece of pain in longing, and the hope for what tomorrow could hold. Thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!
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impressive first three lines
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