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Tonight

I smile as I work
as the day goes by
for soon the night falls
and I will be by your side

Your words have caught me
like a butterfly in a web
spinning my thoughts leaving
lustful images in my head

The sun goes down
as I dress up for you
out the door I run
in my trench and heels too

I knock on your door
praying your home
my heart beats faster
as the door opens more

You smile and take my hand
to lead me inside
my eyes stay on you
anxious I can barely hide

I can no longer take it
as you sit on the couch
standing in front I just smile
letting my trench drop you slouch

My naked body revealed
while I crawl to sit
your lap I rest upon
your lips I sip

Your hands caress me
as you slowly kiss
deeper you penitrate
my soul into bliss

I go deeper again and again
with your touch and your kiss
I close my eyes on this ride
clutching my breast like this

My head tilt back
to let my hair hang low
your hands on my shoulder
clashing our bodies to glow

I look back down to you
as the ride starts to end
you smile resting back
as our sweat starts to cool

I put my trench coat on
and kiss you goodbye
you watch me closely
as your dream can now fly.

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  • Dark Prince Chaos
    December 1, 2008

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    truly tasty like blood on my lips i love this it is a work of art something everyone should read truly a masterpeace i loved the read and it gave me some ideas for my story once more great work this is by far the best poem i have ever read

  • spunskydaze
    September 25, 2008

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    mmmmmm...very nice. very nice! i like the opening becasue im sure we have all gone through this. wastefully letting time go by, running errands, going to work, but knowing that you just want to go home and get laid. haha!!! this was a nice ryhme too!! nice work! nice work!!


  • Terry Collett
    September 25, 2008
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    Very good.

    Very good poem