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Moving On

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You held me captive,
alerting all my senses,
as your whipsers of a summer breeze
rippled like honey
to my very core.

Scented and sweet
we circled around
forever's promises,
as our feet sank deeper
into intimacy,
becoming overpowering.

The ebb and flow
of September's serenity
mesmerised us
in a longing
for familiarity's cloak.

But our waves never met
in epiphany's fulfillment
and the sway gestures us;
it is time to seek
our own surging sea.

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Picture Credit - Steve Hanks
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  • perfectsunset gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    Absolutely loved this.
    Such a soft and sensual tone
    to this while reading. Full
    of love and passion, beautiful
    imagery and deep metaphors.
    Such a meaningful piece
    filled with emotion.

    Amazing write!

    Thanks for sharing & best of luck


  • RowanMoon
    September 25, 2008
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    Most gentle kiss off I've ever read! Pretty!