lovely picture
but never figured eyes being puzzle pieces
sounds so wonderful
always concentrated on the puzzle pieces further down
with eyes tightly shut
and even that is a puzzle I never really got
those wooden chinese puzzles
are much harder
much more esthetic
and so satisfying when you finally get them
A contest entry
- puzzle pieces from the clay by unraveled.
700 points, ended October 18, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is very strange to me, like it needs some connector to wrap it all together, but overall this was an interesting and very true write
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'and even that is a puzzle I never really got'
you said it for me too
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Very good! Good luck in the contest!
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