I'm a lost cause, I swear
Immunization;
I'll close my eyes when you press your lips to mine
Plug my ears when you whisper three sweet words
I won't let this all get me down in the end
Sweetie put your heart away
If you're looking for honesty;
Well you've come to the right place
I honestly can't stand that pair of shoes
and I honestly hate the way you look at me
but darling if you're looking for love
Turn the other way
I'm not promising you anything
You won't get anywhere with me by your side.
and I promise promise promise you
You can tell me I'm guarded;
that you will be something different
You are my knight in shining armor
but baby, I won't get my hopes up.
You wont be anything more than a body in my bed
Author notes
Not sure if this was what you were looking for or not.
Sorry I didn't reserve a spot...
A contest entry
- 40 song titles. by etoile.
600 points, ended September 29, 2008, 35 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i enjoyed reading this. it has such depth and emotion to it. i enjoy these writes the most. i thhink that first shoulda been urs
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i actually really liked this. it's very unique and beautifully written.
I'm a lost cause, I swear
Immunization;
I'll close my eyes when you press your lips to mine
Plug my ears when you whisper three sweet words
I won't let this all get me down in the end
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i love that part. it really got me into the poem and the iamgery is amazing.
very emotional throughout
thanks for entering
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I like this! It's a nice write, and I can most definatly relate to the first stanza... way too much. Best of luck in the contest!
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