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For Karen

I have a friend of many years who
walked with me and shared my tears
Her love and kindness always shines
not a sister but a sweet friend of mine
When we were young and had little
ones we would help each other out


We would go shopping and have a laugh
And fool about then back home to get the
kids from school no more time to have fun
or play at being cool
When we had a fight with our husbands
we would go and have a moan

Then when we felt better we would go back home
You know she is a supper cook and her house was
always full of happy chat and little kids
And to have a coffee  was a rule

Now that we are older and as we lose a friend or two
I thank God for every moment that I have left with you
Good friends are a treasure of that there is no doubt
I don't know where I would be if she hadn't helped me out

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  • BluRosePoet8488
    October 28, 2008

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    A very loving and nicely written tribute. She sounds like a wonderful person to be around. Thanks for entering. Keep the ink flowing and good luck!
    ~Donna~


  • nevadapoet
    September 25, 2008

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    what a perfect write for your dear friend. Good flow in this piece and great imagery. Very nicely done.

    Be well,
    Nevadapoet