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Taurus

Like Mother Earth your beauty lies within
Characterized by your stubborn chin
Dependable, an example to live by
Even if you're only one star in the sky

Stalwart and patient, you stick to your guns
Through the darkest moons and the brightest suns
Caring and nurturing, your arms always wide
To embrace anyone who needs to confide

Full of solutions in sensible ways
Never confusing, you mean what you say
Great under pressure, you don't panic or freak
You're smart and you always think when you speak

Your love endures throughout the years
Consoling and soothing, wiping away tears
Sensual in an earthy and wholesome way
You just keep plugging along day after day

Hardworking and strong you reap what you sow
Such a pleasure to love and a joy to know
Taureans are great people, it's easy to see
They're the mellowest people, yep a Taurus ...
That's me

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http://barbiedoll.deviantart.com/artTaurus22849877 I am universal I am life I am also Ratkos and a Taurus

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  • Ademon
    December 14, 2008

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    Oh I completely agree, I'm a Libra, and I thought you wrote this wonderfully, maybe when you find the time you can possibly write one about the Libra's? I don't know a whole lot about my sign just that I'm a Libra and listen well.


  • Re-invention silver member
    October 2, 2008

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    wow this is so beautiful and so perfectly penned! loved the flow and the meaning you gave ot the prompt.
    This is awesomely done and was very well enjoyed.


  • Ken-Maverick
    September 25, 2008

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    OMG this is an excellent write
    I think this is my fav of yours so far.
    I dont know what Watermark is talking about down there but this is poetry, and poetry is different for everyone. It doesnt have to make sense to all.
    Pen on my friend
    All the best
    Ken


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    September 25, 2008

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    Great Work

    I've never tried to write about my astrological sign before, but you did it in a well metered and smooth flowing way. It was a joy to read. Great Job. ~mandie~


  • ratkos
    September 25, 2008
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    i agree with you completely! A job I used to do required us to use these astrological books that had condensed explanations of each sign.That is what I used. Although people are different ,Taureans as a group are purported to possess these qualities. Regardless of what I possess, My birthday falls within the taurean section therefore I am a taurus.


  • Watermark
    September 25, 2008

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    Do you have any idea just how many people in the world were born when the sun was in Taurus?

    Do you think they are all like this?

    I know several and each have marked differences. Astrological profiling is pithy at best, but a full birth chart gives a slightly bigger picture.

    I hope you don't truly believe this is you.

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