We look down sadly
at aging beauty
Feeling how bad it must be
to return to her childhood
Not thinking she is alive
reliving the memories of her youth
Once again
Author notes
Credit artist...solitude_stock_image_by_damien_c
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Contest 10 entries 30 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended September 25, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Enter your GOLD or SILVER prewrites here!! by perfectsunset.
400 points, ended November 6, 2008, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Struggling to find my muse lately :(
Comments
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You wrote such a moving poem in response to the viewing of the picture ... well done you
and congrats on the trophy; best wishes in this contest aslo!
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Thank you
Thank you so much. This picture just spoke so much to me.
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So very true...the cycle of life continues and we often look at it wrong and find it a view we wish not see...a wonderful and creative take on the prompt...
thank you so much for entering!
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Thank you
Thank you so much and thank you for Silver! This was such a powerful prompt. This picture spoke to me
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awww, wow, this is wonderful dad *hugs*
lovely write and good luck
take care, Stephanie ♥
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Thank you
Thank you sweet daughter. This was such a powerful picture to work with
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not bad, better than most in the contest.
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Thank you
This picture just spoke to me
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