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the Tempest Tempts

I am temptation:
10 letters of bitter zest
chasing sugar.
you are sugar coated;
shake on my cake?
Oh wait--
you are liquid
in my eyes
on my tongue
*just a taste*
and then I'm done...

I thought you weren't coming along,
but here you are,
knocking on my door
with those same silver eyes
-they were so sorry-
someone would explain;
they would have to,
you never knew the words

I am temptation,
but you will never love me like you thought.

Author notes

based on a dream that was based on reality. Something like that.

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