I’m full of happy dreams, or tears of broken trust
Traveling by plane, or car maybe boat, or bus
You could be young, you could be old, your life is packed within
Chasing after or running from joy or is it sin
A few blocks, a world away, makes no diff to me
Pack your heart, and soul my friend, off we will soon be
Author notes
http://fistfulofsand.deviantart.com/art/Suitcase-In-Road-22979064
A contest entry
- Tell me the story of this object ~ Suitcase by Aussie Gypsy.
650 points, ended September 30, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This was a fabulous little dittie I had to go back and read over a few times, I enjoyed the journey you took me on. Best to you in the contest
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Wow ! !
Brilliant take on the pic. Best of luck
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The image prompt and your poem create a trully amazing combination of imagery and deep thought. Once again your words speak in me in more ways than one. One way to wherever you go please....
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