You and I don’t know each other,
but it appears we may be much alike.
One day I might be dark and down
and the next I’ll up and take a hike.
It’s hard to know where I’d fit in.
Can you use someone who’s forty-one?
A sister, a friend or a crazy muse?
One thing’s for sure; I’m loads of fun!
So pencil me in for an interview,
I’m as honest and caring as can be.
Ask me anything you dare to know,
We’ll be great friends-I think you’ll agree.
In a list
A contest entry
- AP Family rhyme by piccola.
600 points, ended September 29, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well composed nice flow dear Nice open flow and wonderful content!!!!! Congrats on the bronze dear!
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Congrads for the trophy! This is great and the abcb rhyme scheme adds depth and makes it so sincere. I guess you're in the family!
Love,
Amera♥
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Oh this is lovely
I loved the way you wrote this pem its like two little girls whispering in each others ears asking the other will you be my friend .
Great write here
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Excellent resume
Well crafted with good flow of the unforced rhyming verse.
Congratulations on the well-deserved award.
Well Done!
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What about best friend? We can share things, inspire each other and if we need to vent ... well, I'm always all ears
Welcome to my family. I'm adding you as of now.
Also to my favorites list
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That sounds wonderful! You're on my page as well :-D
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