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Through all the murder
The pain endured by flame resistant heartstrings
I'm ashamed to say
I've lost my will to love you
It's been so long and just too hard
I know you don't want me anymore.
Tell me goodbye so
I can get rid of you once and for all

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  • mcw120588
    October 9, 2008
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    wow..this is short and powerful. the sense of being set free being cut loose. well done


  • penman gold member
    September 26, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.