I want to hate you,
But I can't.
You are the roller coaster
that hangs me upside down
with my heart
and stomach in my throat.
I want to scream,
I want to beat my fists
into your iron chest
until blood pours from
my knuckles
so I can feel the warmth
of something, ANYthing,
other than what I feel now,
But I can't,
I want to cry,
But I can't,
The tears won't come anymore.
I want to hate you,
But I can't when
I still love you.
A contest entry
- Heartbreak Hotel by neenz.
900 points, ended November 10, 2008, 34 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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awesome!!
loving this!! i have really MISSED your writings!!
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Awesome!
A roller-coaster of emotions flow here sweet sis, and hats off to you for expressing yourself so well. Much love and light, and congrates on the bronze!
Bro Timothy
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aww tht really sweet
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Nicely done.
"I want to beat my fists
into your iron chest "
I like this imagery, a heart behind iron that cannot be reached.
Thank you for the entry.
-N -
i am always impressed with the seemingly effortless way you express your heart - it is a sad feeling that surrounds me as i read this heartbreaking poetic offering, may your heart and soul find the comfort and healing needed, dear poet, you have my respect for your skill as a writer as well as the transparancy you have, and continue to display.
blessings and best wishes,
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