I
accept
your stength and
energy in
my life, hold my hand
and we will walk awhile;
toward unknown destinations,
dance on beaches in the moonlight,
hold the mystery of each moment,
eyes upon horizons far… step by step.
Author notes
pronunciation of toward in seventh line is one syllable, (tôrd, tōrd)
http://www.answers.com/topic/toward
A contest entry
- Etheree Me Please (Contest) by Paloszoo.
625 points, ended October 6, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nicely written...
Only a very talented writer can pour so many emotions in a few verses... but you need to say no more...
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Lovely again I really enjoyed this read. you are exceptional
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so very sweet
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Beautiful sentiments in this romantic piece! Nicely done! Thanks for entering my contest. I’m honored that you would show your work here. Keep up the great work!
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Step by step, new horizons will dawn, as will new beginnings. Where the unknown becomes the known and where the future lies. Embrace the moment and hold on tight, enjoy yourselves. A fine piece here
Thank you.
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thanks Mike,
indeed the scent of a new future, thanks for the feedback, Patsy
just caught his name is Mike also, but he's Irish not Scottish...lol
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I am holding your hand in friendship
and walking toward unknown destinations...
good luck in the contest
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Acceptance of an other is an intregral part of a relationship. Good effort butterfly.
Paul
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thanks babe...g'nite
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