I realized I loved you more than you ever loved me
And the only thing I could do was to set you free
If I must I will continue to live without you in my life
So be it I am determined to do what is only right
"Silently she waits for closure," yet there is none
For it’s to late and the deed cannot be undone
Dejectedly she stands, tears falling like torrential rain
As she wallows broken and dishearten in unspoken pain
It’s much too late to take back words once they have been said
Somberly she questions just how her love had became so dead
She gave to him everything she had and even so much more
He acted as if being with her was just another unwanted chore
Someone once said “If you love it then you have to let it go”
If they love you they’ll come back; and she found this not to be so
So she weeps for a love that will never again be
For the man she sent away so that he could be happy
A contest entry
- Finsh Me!! by Deaths Servant.
300 points, ended September 30, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I liked the picture. It is a very descriptive picture that could have taken you anywhere.
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and for leaving a comment. God Bless,
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Good Luck! Great poem.
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and leaving a comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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Oooh. Nice. I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme you have going here. Really quite enjoyable. What I liked the most about this was the story. Beautifully written.
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Thank you so much for taking the time to comment. I am very glad that you enjoyed the read. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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this poem is so beautiful it maid a tear came to my eye
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Hi Tanika, I'm glad you liked it and I appreciate you taking the time to read it and leaving such a nice comment. Thank you and God Bless, Jo-Ann
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