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Once among a hidden valley...

How come I feel, much this way

This feeling haunts me, everyday

And now I think, it's time to pay

Death a little visit, on this day



Take me away, she said in tears

Take away all of these dreaded fears

I'm tired of life, I will recall

I've been up the rise, now it's time to fall



Stay away from me,

My mortal enemy

Let me be,

So I can see

The shadow of Death,

in his black abyss

So I can feel the kiss,

Of Death on its way



Tear after Tear, falling my friend

Is this really the end?

My heart'll never mend



Carry me away, sire

For soon I shall tire

And live nevermore, neverless,

In this long living fire....

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  • kel dog
    September 24, 2008
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    i like it. Great write. One of the best poems ive read on allpoetry.


  • lemmeXdie
    September 24, 2008
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    this is really kool.
    ummmmmm....
    i like it.