I can see it in his beautiful green eyes,
he is madly in love,
oh what a lucky young lass
but I just don't get how he affection
can shift,
can alternate to another girl so fast.
Just yesterday, he was stroking me
the way he is right now,
he should be hugging, loving, and
squeezing me tight,
instead of making me howl
for I have lost his total adoration
and quite likely even his brotherly attachment
and now he is tearing up my heart,
bit by bit, fragment by fragment
As he smiles amiably at her bright
and grinning visage,
and she laughs at her luck of finding
a guy with such a magnificent body image,
I waltz right on to get back at my dear old friend,
by sending him on his way to good ole jealousy land,
for I embrace his friend, so tall and bright and bubbly,
telling him that he's so cute and cuddly
Yet my buddy, my future lover, my bestest friend so true,
didn't even glance at me, and just kept ogling
at this other girl, so witty, pretty, and so new
I guess I'll just have to keep on trying
to win back his love,
for it's the only thing keeping me from dying.
Author notes
seriously, yesterday he kissed me on the cheek and told me never to escape his grasp....
now he's fallin back in love with his ex, i can sense it =(
oh wellz
i expect too much from him
i'll find someone... someday
*face in hands, i sob at my computer* =(
hopefully i'll cheer up soon
i really need some hugglez right now
A contest entry
- Love Askew by whispernthedark.
875 points, ended October 7, 2008, 33 entries
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Comments
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The emotions pour out this one, I love the humor you are able to inject. Great write, thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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AAWWWW!!!! HUGGLEZ!!!!!!!!!!!!! don't worry. everything's going to be great adria. just don't cry.
this poem was really great. nice write and keep it up!!
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HUGGELZ!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU BABE!!!!! IM SORRY IVE BEEN TALKIN BOUT ME AND HAVNT ASKED BOUT YOU!!!!!!!!!
WELL I KNOW YOULL FIND SOMEONE OR MY NAME ISNT SUNDRY MARIE K.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND TRUST ME YOU WONT DIE WITHOUT HIM!!!! I MIGHT DIE WITHOUT MATT THO!!! LOL
ANYWAY YOU WONT DIE WITHOUT HIM!!!!!(SORRY BOUT THE CAPS MY COMPUTER IS STUCK ON CAP LOCKS)
LOVE
SUNNY
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thanks sunny- you are just too nice! i really needed that comment, so thanks =)
adria
hugglez!
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