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Forward

They say you need to take a few steps backwards
to keep moving forward.
But the reality is
life won't wait for your mistakes.

Author notes

This is just a piece based on a prompt from my "Poets Club" group.

It's a game where you must use between 15-25 words inspired by someones prompt. Everyone has to leave a prompt.

My prompt was 'forward'.

Any advice would be lovely?

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  • Nymphetemine
    December 13, 2008

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    Liked this write. I feel sometimes you have to step backwards to see the clearer picture. Life is life at the end of the day. We all make mistakes. Wonderful poem.
    Yorkshire Bard. Blessings.


  • xeroabyss II
    September 25, 2008
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    Stepping backwards causes you to get run over by the ambitious, blind and brash!

  • DarkRomantic113
    September 24, 2008
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    Great insight, sister!


  • Harlequin Dance
    September 24, 2008
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    It's so true. So simple. So realistic. So [insert appropriate adjective here].

    Nice!

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