Fluid streams pour
into flooding gates
of rapture
As her flesh inundates
with lethal kisses,
saturated by agile
tongues at play
Bodies fold into
passionate florets,
budding into crimson
flames of wonder
As enchanted lovers descend
inside spirals of romance,
beckoned by erotic obsessions
Like a merging sunrise
amidst clouds of
infinite glory
Author notes
darell, Amaranthine Lover
A contest entry
- Best Prewrites From September 2008 by amaranthine lover.
2100 points, ended February 6, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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an interesting piece
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Wow..
Excellent write my friend very sensual and real vividly described and I agree the pic. is amazing but as Jinsays 'says' l.o.l. the title doesn't do your great work justice..
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this is a very nice peice. I like the pic at the top, it's really gorgeous!
keep up your great work, best of luck in the contest.
CrimsonViper (Midoriko) -
Nicely done my friend, beautifully sensual and softly flowing write. Best of luck in the contest... Scott
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wow....there went the air in my chest. This is absolutely lovely. The name is silly. It's too silly for a poem as sweet as this.
Very very nice,
I am impressed, and would like to see this in one of my PW contests.
I'll surely give it something,
much love,
jin
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