I see you walking side by side,
Sending shivers through my hide.
You laugh with her,
She's such a slut.
Tiny waist, big boobs, no butt.
You try so hard,
I don't know why.
Senior girl with a sophomore guy?
It'll never happen,
Just give in.
Lust is such a terrible sin.
I hate that girl
Who stole your heart.
It should've been mine from the start.
How can I possibly compare?
Her lucious lips, and flowing hair.
But I care more for you
Than she ever will.
My heart is warm and she's just chill.
I cannot stand that stupid girl,
Who threw your head into a whirl.
I'm more than jealou
I will admit.
But I've got every right to be in a snit.
I'm in love with a boy
Who's in love with a whore.
Being so jealous is such a chore.
But should it come to you
Picking her over me,
It won't be pretty,
Just wait and see.
A contest entry
- Lurve by Baisi.
600 points, ended September 27, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
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450 points, ended October 3, 2008, 60 entries
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Comments
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Aww this is so sad. I know how it feels tho. Cheer up. There is something better ahead for you. Best of luck to you in this contest
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yup i can smpathize i hate sluts
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This poem is absolutely, positively AMAZING! BRILLIANT!!!! BREATHTAKING! STUNNING! I absolutely loved it, and obviously, Tanna (never-again) agrees.
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this is an awesome poem. i love it. great write.
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