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Island Of Cursed Dogs

It wasn’t that long ago
That I was just like you
I stood up straight
Walking on two legs
You know, human

They called me Boot beard

Aye, I was even the captain
Of me own ship

A grand ship
Lady Hades
Ahh, how grand she wers

I sailed the 7 seas
On me lady
Me mates
At my command

Tis only pride tempted
Me into exploring
The Island Of Cursed Dogs

As a young lad I was told
To stay away.
Now the fearless captain
Is I

I sail where I please.

Me and those
Bloody scallywags,
Yellow to the bone
Walked the sands
Of Cursed Dogs
And fell into
A deep sleep

Now I stands here
Before you today

Let this be a warning
To you lads...

If your Ma and Pa
Tells you to keep away
From something

You bloody well better do it!

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  • Nickycole
    September 26, 2008
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    I read this I get you were talking pirate talk and you were giving out a warning. not bad.


  • pinkink
    September 25, 2008
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    Oh, I loved it! You speak pirate so well. You are very believable.


  • queen Moderators member
    September 24, 2008

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    thank you for entering and good luck in the contest


  • Riamh
    September 24, 2008
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    *chuckles*
    good one!


    • afroqban
      September 24, 2008
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      thank u. it was fun to write this. lol, thanks for checkin it out

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