Love turns to me,
says she is not feeling well,
she whispered I love you,
as her eyelids slowly fell.
The last words love spoke,
as she was taken from me,
by the powers of the beyond,
it’s all so foggy for me to see.
Left alone with two small children,
trying to explain how this could be,
knowing how much they loved her,
and how much she meant to me.
I loved them to death,
and made good men of the two,
but darling we all remember,
the wonderful times with you.
Author notes
Dedicated to my wife who passed away 14 years ago. I still love you Hun!
A contest entry
- Tales Of Loss by peregrin.
450 points, ended October 1, 2008, 38 entries
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oh no oh no


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Yes Yes it is all very true, Now I write in hopes to bring life to you.
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Wow...
True love never dies.
This is very sweet...
and such emotion.
I love it!
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this made me sad , I have lost so many of my loved ones and it hurts so bad still






