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She's Gone



Love turns to me,
says she is not feeling well,
she whispered I love you,
as her eyelids slowly fell.

The last words love spoke,
as she was taken from me,
by the powers of the beyond,
it’s all so foggy for me to see.

Left alone with two small children,
trying to explain how this could be,
knowing how much they loved her,
and how much she meant to me.

I loved them to death,
and made good men of the two,
but darling we all remember,
the wonderful times with you.

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Dedicated to my wife who passed away 14 years ago. I still love you Hun!

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  • Rheea gold member
    September 28, 2008
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    oh no oh no


    • Topaze
      September 28, 2008
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      Yes Yes it is all very true, Now I write in hopes to bring life to you.


  • peregrin
    September 26, 2008
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    Wow...
    True love never dies.
    This is very sweet...
    and such emotion.
    I love it!


  • my hero is daddy
    September 24, 2008
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    this made me sad , I have lost so many of my loved ones and it hurts so bad still