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I'm Tired

I'm tired of trying,
for something I'll never get.
I'm tried of crying,
for something thats not even worth it.
It's so hard to even stay strong,
when nothing is right,
evrything seems to go wrong,
and what I want is out of sight.
I'm tired of smiling,
and pretending that I'm happy.
Your numbers the one I keep dialing,
and I am left here feeling crappy.
I'm tired, simple as that.
I dont want to try any more,
It's just not worth the effort.




idk....i was bored

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  • Bohemianwriter
    October 14, 2008

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    simply fantastic!

    actually if someones who ever felt like this as i have would really love this!..like me!!
    you didnt have to word it intellectually and it didnt have to have a regular outstanding rhyme scheme the fact you just put your feeling on the paper and worded every ounce of your feeling o forwardly just straight to the point is what 85 words (i counted!:-D) but its a thousand words people around the world fail to share...pleease keep up the writing! your talented!


  • colorxmyxworld
    September 24, 2008
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    WEIRD!!!! haha
    naahhh i likeed it heh