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Pongy Haiku

 

 

 

 

 

nutritious
beans on toast

~the musical meal~

 

 

 

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  • Mari Goes gold member
    September 27, 2008
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    LOLOLOL oh boy
    Sound and ...smell at dinner time


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    September 26, 2008

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    Yea...we sang that( beans, the musical fruit song) all the time in school and some times at home when we had beans and cornbread...to this day it is one of my favorite meals...but now they have 'beano' so no more fun songs...


  • Harrisham Minhas gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    haha
    Well-expressed.
    Good luck in the contest.




  • Yemassee gold member
    September 24, 2008

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    To show my level of intelligence...here is one of the variations of the old schoolyard song:

    Beans, beans, the magical fruit.
    The more you eat, the more you toot.
    The more you toot, the better you feel.
    So eat your beans with every meal!

    They taste so good going in, and smell so bad coming out....