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Love, Commanded

Love is the law
love under will

Call it temptaion
call it thrill

Hold my heart amidts your palms
Hold my sway between your hips
Hold my face within your hands
Hold my sigh here in your lips

Love is the law
Love, under will

Love is meditaion

Love is being still

Fingertips that brush and trace
half-lidded eyes that steal my brace
and oh, a whsiper makes its escape

breath
sweet, like dusk
like the moon

and speaks so delicately
so achingly

You are my law
And you are my will

You are my love
You are my thrill

And with those words
I, in my state of euphoria
encircled by strong arms
and adorned with a tender kiss
know

Love is my law
Love, under will

There is nothing beyond you, my love

and oh

You keep
my heart
filled

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  • SchizoChic
    September 27, 2008
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    Very nice poem here indeed. Nice take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.