I want to know
my Daddy’s name.
Why do you act
like it’s a game?
He’s not your Daddy,
he’s only mine.
And it is him
I long to find.
Is his name John,
Mark, or Jack?
Won’t you please tell me
so I can bring him back?
I want to find my lost Daddy,
That is my aim.
Mommy, will you ever
give me his name?
Comments
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You have such an easy rhyming technique. It comes so natural to you! I am jealous. Once again, lovely and touching.
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awww,sounds like a child actually saying it. good poem
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I likes this one!
Simple yet effective.
Goes well with the childlike tone of the piece.(Now, I'm assuming that's what you went for, that or I just comepletely embarrassed myself!)
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