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I'm Learning

I'm learning who my friends are,
more and more everyday.
I thought that you were one of them,
but I am only your prey.

I've always stood beside you,
even when you were wrong.
Now I know I was a fool,
you were laughing all along.

It took me twenty years
to finally comprehend,
I was only a tool for you,
I was never your friend.

Now let me thank you,
for showing me the light.
I bid you good-bye,
we will never reunite.

i need a GOOD title for this one...any ideas????

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  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    September 24, 2008
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    How about 'You Suck' or 'F*** You'?

    Sorry, letting my own emotions get in the way!1 I have a friend like this, I'm only just learning myself.
    And I'm glad it's now, so she's not continuing to take without giving anything in return.

    What about 'Let Me Thank-You' or 'Your Prey'