Black sheets cover the
ancient lies beneath me
So cold & jaded.
How dare you commit
such an act
So forgotten & hated.
Oh, what beautifully disastrous sins
will corrupt both good & evil
when I’m through with you.
Though you plead for renewal
the darkness we are not
through with you…
Nor will we ever be.
Comments
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how dark, and chilling.
you uses such a tone that any one would be fearful to hear.
great write.
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Thanks for commenting on my poem, your poem is a WOW. Hahas, nicely penned strong emotions there. Cheers!!
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thank 4 the comment on my poem
but omg, your is good
i feel like a *bunny* now lol -
wow! very powerful wording, I love how you have used words like corrupt and renewal which you never hear in poems.
very well written, this is a moving piece
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