Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

For Mom....... A Poem by Erin V

Im sorry I get mad sometimes
and take it out on you.
Im sorry I take advantage
of the little things you do.
I honestly look up to you,
your opinion of me matters.
Thats why when I let you down
I cant take it, my heart shatters.
Ive done some stupid stuff this year
but I really hope you know,
Im really trying to get better
even if it doesnt show.
One day Ill make you proud of me,
I will not let you down.
I really do appreciate
the way you've stuck around.
I guess Ill leave my other thoughts
hidden, under cover
Just know how much I love you
because you are my Mother.

Author notes

This was written by my daughter Erin, she has had a rough few years, but I want her to know I am proud of her, no matter what... Thanks Erin for such a beautiful poem.

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Puppydog gold member
    September 25, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    AW! SUCH SWEET EMOTION!!!

    Her first step has been made, now she can start anew with her mother by her side. Her love for you shows so much in this write.


  • biggdoggspaz5000
    September 24, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    i like this poem it relates to me and my mother sometime i do the stuff in the first couple lines but i love my mother and thank you for this poem it made me cry and realize that i do love my mother to death and would do anything and everything for her thank you and have your self a nice day i will check out the rest of your poetry and comment on them thank you