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Licks On

Cherry slushie stained tongue
molests the handcuffed city.

Sweetness dribbling off its buds
enwraps young maiden beauties—
bloodying their ripened lips.

“Paint them, babe!  Now kiss me!”

Bliss licks on.

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    September 26, 2008

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    This is a well thought out piece, nice images kept within, best to you and congratulations on your shiny bronze trophy.


  • Rizzie
    September 24, 2008
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    very pretty! i like it alot. thanks for entering