Crisp whispers wedge ways,
Freeze in cracks of a cool mind,
Eroding self restraint.
Liberation,
Unheard calls to a shaddow never there.
Bitter realization-
It begins again.
Author notes
Her tongue has bitemarks from all the things she never said.
Trying to forget someone you love is trying to remember someone you never met.
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Comments
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Very excellent write.
great thoughts & visuals.
Thanks for sharing & best of luck -
I'll be honest, I'm not entirely sure what this is trying to say, but it sounds great read aloud! Some lovely word choices.
Kat
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