Am I Amusing?
Are you accusing me of the jester's cause
abusing laughter,accusing after, that slight pause.
Before you slip, curve your lips..
what-is-so-funny? you feel compelled ta shun me, run me
up the wall, here I fall
Knocked down, by a wave of anger,
now in danger of..not a stranger of,
that profound sound, all around me
that, tiny smile,a mile wide, you just can't seem to hide
Why? Am i amusing? ....Sigh
quite confusing,now refusing to
accept your view of who, who i am
Snicker,giggle,yea,haha
Keep laughin,i'm crafting,drafting a way
To crack that curve, tap that nerve
Break-you-down,drown you,surround you
In a world of hate,where your placated,jaded and faded
into nothing more than just another chuckle..
Now tell me again,
Am I amusing?
Author notes
I had wrote this on paper then saw this contest, wouldn't believe how much i had to cram to get this into 20 lines 
either way, let the commas show you where the breaks were, theres only slight pauses.
A contest entry
- My Poetry Posse by Unforgotten.
750 points, ended September 29, 2008, 5 entries
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745 points, ended October 4, 2008, 73 entries
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Comments
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You've got a nice flow to this one. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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Great rhyming, can feel the severe animosity! What triggered this write?
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