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Woman...

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With lissome walk,
delicate, yet strong

on Earth, an angel, or a devil;
what ever serves her most.

 

With a mother's girth,
beyond her worth,
a lover whom's laughter's so free,
and still filled of desire, of heat.

 

Cloaked in mystery, creation;
dusky delight, in pleasure soaked.
With a pliant breast, yet iron will;
sweet ferocity of nature's evoked.

 

A man's mate by heaven,
guardian of man's soul
God's gift to make man whole;

giver of life and love,
vessel to nature's goal.

 

With honeyed lips
she inspires, cajoles, dares;

to anchor his worst, with his best.

 

She has the keys to his secrets,
his fears;

then creates his haven of peace,
of rest.

 

A woman, that's what she is;

our bearer of pure strength.

The envy of many...

 

Who is she?
A woman.
And also,
a lady.

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  • SeptemberFaith
    November 12, 2008

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    Very well done. You talk alot about a woman being part of a man or something that she does for him.. woman should be these things for herself. A woman should be whole without a man.

    Good luck in the contest,
    Criss

    • AngelicMistress gold member
      November 16, 2008
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      Hi Friend:

      I truly believe that a woman "is" everything she needs to be,
      and is able to survive in this world with -or- without a man.....

      My piece is about "woman", how she is and how she can get
      what she wants because she "is" a woman.....

      Moreover, God created us because He knew man was lost without
      a woman by His side.....

      Thanks for your review, and for acepting my submission to your contest,
      blessed be,
      loves and likes,
      AngelicMistress...Tanya

  • Cannonsfire gold member
    November 11, 2008
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    Such a beautiful and soft portrait here, thank you for the entry C


  • second-born
    October 6, 2008

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    'on Earth, an angel, or a devil; what ever serves her most...'

    this is so beautiful...you've presented a woman with such a strong conviction in a very sensual and delicate way...thank you for sharing a masterpiece!



  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 25, 2008

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    Never ever has that word held such a strong meaning, close enough to the real thing, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest and the challenge
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