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Woman...

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With lissome walk,
delicate, yet strong

on Earth, an angel, or a devil;
what ever serves her most.

 

With a mother's girth,
beyond her worth,
a lover whom's laughter's so free,
and still filled of desire, of heat.

 

Cloaked in mystery, creation;
dusky delight, in pleasure soaked.
With a pliant breast, yet iron will;
sweet ferocity of nature's evoked.

 

A man's mate by heaven,
guardian of man's soul
God's gift to make man whole;

giver of life and love,
vessel to nature's goal.

 

With honeyed lips
she inspires, cajoles, dares;

to anchor his worst, with his best.

 

She has the keys to his secrets,
his fears;

then creates his haven of peace,
of rest.

 

A woman, that's what she is;

our bearer of pure strength.

The envy of many...

 

Who is she?
A woman.
And also,
a lady.

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  • Jalalbad gold member
    July 20
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    Should have won gold. Beautiful write

  • Brilliant. =]


  • Cannonsfire
    November 11, 2008
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    Such a beautiful and soft portrait here, thank you for the entry C


  • second-born
    October 6, 2008

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    'on Earth, an angel, or a devil; what ever serves her most...'

    this is so beautiful...you've presented a woman with such a strong conviction in a very sensual and delicate way...thank you for sharing a masterpiece!



  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 25, 2008

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    Never ever has that word held such a strong meaning, close enough to the real thing, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest and the challenge

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