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The Unfortunate Truth

Even in the night
shadows leave an image
of an everlasting, goodbye

Through spiritual footsteps
away walking in sounded
turmoil of one's heart

Seeking redemption
from the inequities
we threw away, laughing

Disguised as guilt
on a silken sheet
we fly away

 











 

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thoughts by tainfinite

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  • Xombii
    October 7, 2008
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    This is beautiful, but I would love to see your ap name in the authors notes ^.<