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The Most Absurd Poem Ever Written.

On a pyramid of skeletons, beneath the blazing sun,
sits a spider wearing trainers, who’s flies are still undone.
He is playing a guitar and singing out of tune,
with his sister spinning cobwebs, round a purple coloured moon

Dolphins swim in circles, catching  manta rays at will,
while a prism with a funny name is writing with a quill.
In the pentagon, the President, hides behind a bush,
looking for a sandwich and a pen that he can push.
   
Surreal tasting dreamers, wearing octagons for shoes,
have a choice between two hectagons, which one will they choose ?
Im going round in triangles, looking for a word, 
believe me when I tell you, this poem is absurd.
                   

Author notes

Option number 10 - Geometric shapes.

You did say be creative

So I'll give you two roses instead

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  • Atrus
    October 3, 2008
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    Ha, this is an enjoyable nonsense poem, thanks.


  • Maldronah
    September 27, 2008

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    I liked this. It's a good poem
    and as meaningless as a symphony.
    Could I have another icosahedron?
    Please?


  • KyleBerg gold member
    September 26, 2008

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    BAHAHA! This is hilarious! You could have entered it as the LOLing option as well Wow, this was very creative and (As the title suggested) absurd. "Who's flies are still undone"? Ha ha! I was cracking up through this whole poem. The only thing i didn't like was the last stanza where it seemed you were just cramming in a few more shapes without making much sense But still, well done, thanks for entering and best of luck!

    PS: Yes, that's right: THREE


  • Mrs. Moretti
    September 25, 2008
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    Haha! I love it! Nicely done, and very comical! It made me laugh


  • midnights shadow
    September 24, 2008
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    I love this, very witty! Good rhythm, rhyme and structure. Title is very catchy too. Good luck!

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