Oh God
I never study volumes
for acquiring the intellect to locate you
I am not lured for
any of the maneuver to correct my proviso
I am an innocent man
and simply I do believe that
for recognizing the own father
no schooling is necessary
Oh God..
Author notes
Option..
1) The soul would have no rainbow, had the eyes no tears.
A contest entry
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575 points, ended October 7, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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So much wisdom in this poem! I agree with you that your relationship with your earthly father will play such a deep roll with your relationship with God! I loved the picture and I wish that I could be with my father, or that my daughter could have one more hug from her's!!!
LOVELY
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Wow, this was so deeply emotional,
touching & heartfelt.
Beautiful thoughts in this.
A lovely write.
Thanks for sharing & best of luck
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A marveleous piece...
A marveleous piece; loved the lines:
"for recognizing the own father
no schooling is necessary"
recognizing should be as natural as one's own breathing; another delightful poem from the master. --Joe
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yes...innocent faith in the Real...I love this one, my friend...Peace, Rhonda Best wishes for the contest.
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"for recognizing the own father
no schooling is necessary"
These are great lines, indeed we don't need to go to school or to be educated to recognise a true father or our all father, God. Nice write from you again, short and powerful!
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I like the way you've left the dual meaning unresolved, that is to say, a child will recognize his own father without teaching, and I do believe we all can recognize God, our heavenly father without teaching also.
Thought provoking write Prabhudayal.
Paul
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every poem is a message from
you to us, from you to God...
you are inspirational, my
friend. Love, Lane
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god work. flows good. nice idea. keep it up.
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