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Silent Cougar

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He walks the path of silence

 

He nurtures from deep within

 

A man of strength and faithfulness

 

Always a friend.

 

Stands tall beside the innocent

 

Ready to defend

 

A voice of strength and honor

 

Loyal to the end.

 

So if you don't know this Cougar

 

I highly recommend,

 

That you get to know him

 

For he makes ,a wonderful  friend~~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

For you na Hetane, nemehotatse forever and a day...http://allpoetry.com/Silent%20Cougar


My sweet Hetane's words can not be allowed to fall below
so with great honor i shall place them here~

Nemehotatse my sweet Hemeoone...
My sweet Hemeoone.
I am drawn to tears for the love you have shown me.
Your words lay across my heart
The honour you bestowed upon me
Has been nothing less than a blessing
And every waken day
I thank destiny for making our paths cross.
The comments from others below
Have taken my breath away
Never have I felt so overwhelmed
And without you
I would never had made it this far
You have given me so much
And have made me who I am
And for that
I will always love you.
Niaish my Heméoone niaish

Silent Cougar




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  • John BoSox
    November 16

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    Beautiful..THe definition of love..no more words to say

    John


  • AdornedSouls
    November 7

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    Oh wow, very beautiful, I wish I could write like you, though I only write dark and eerie poems, but we all have a wonderful sense of style, very emotional poem I give full credit to you ^.^


  • whyspr gold member
    October 18

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    Truer words could not be spoken. Your Hetane is a wonderful and loyal friend. Kind and caring. He always has a good word to say. I love how you placed his response right after the poem. It's very fitting, and shows the level of your honor and respect for the man you love. Very nice my friend.
    The poem itself flows smoothly from one line to the next with slight pauses just where it needs to be. Beautifully written. and Cougar response adds to the depth and beauty of this write.
    I loved reading this!

    Whyspr


  • raggyann
    October 12
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    oh silent cougar is just wonderful and you honer him so well
    bless both of you


  • SunDew
    July 12

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    no need for words

    Nor can I think of any to say, for it is a wonderful poem about a wonderful person, from a wonderful person.


    ~Bright Cheetah


  • awannabepoet
    July 8
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    What a wonderful tribute to one whom I am certain is most worthy of such praise and honor.


  • Sunshine Always
    May 18
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    No need for my words dear sister, yours are enough to fill any heart to the brim. May the great spirit wrap you both in his love....From my heart to yours...mal


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 26

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    This is wonderful I loved it. I love the way you write about Silent Cougar since he is your best friend. Your love shows.


  • anaisnais
    March 16

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    It's always great to know when you have dependable, loyal and trustworthy friends, and your poetry sings of the love of such so beautifully and warmly. Well done sweet sister, niaish for sharing. Mornig dove/Anna-Marie 'hug' 'rose'


  • wolfman7
    October 6, 2008
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    This is a beautiful poem! I love the style and the spacings; they make it all the better.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 7, 2008
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      wolfman7

      thank you kindly wolf man it was so easy to write for he is a wonderful man and so dear to my heart...


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    Mommy this is beautiful. I'm sure that Daddy loved it, I know that I do. your words are full of love and of beauty and it can be felt .. aww I love you both very much

    kat


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 6, 2008
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      Sensual Angel

      Thank you sweetheart so very much and your mommy is thrilled you enjoyed my words for our Cougar...


  • DropDeadDreaming
    September 29, 2008
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    i know this cougar..


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 29, 2008
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      Skeet08

      then my little friend you know of his great courage and love for all...the strength within his words and all his poetry...you know when he speaks his words are truth and he will always be a friend niaish so much for reading


  • luna-midnight gold member
    September 27, 2008

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    awwww, this is so love;y and heartfelt, keep writting and take care, and congrats on having such a lovely friend, im sure he appreciates you
    Stephanie ♥


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 27, 2008
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      luna-midnight

      Thank you very much im so very pleased you enjoyed and yes he did love it thanks again


  • xxDemonicxx
    September 26, 2008
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    WOoOoOOow
    wonderfull
    loved it


  • trekkergirl
    September 26, 2008

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    This is a very nice poem that honors your friendship very well. Great write. Good job. Flows well. Not forced at all.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 26, 2008
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      trekkergirl

      Thank you kindly...I so wanted it to be perfect for him and for all to be able to feel the words that mean so much to me...Niaish again


  • buffsab99
    September 25, 2008

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    Beautiful

    This is such a beautiful write, your words always flow like the winds of spring


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 26, 2008
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      buffsab99

      awwww! how sweet thank you so much for your kindness and very pleased you enjoyed...


  • tomisb
    September 25, 2008
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    Lovely praise for a friend. Rich in your love.
    Peace and Light
    White Horse Flying


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 26, 2008
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      tomisb

      sweet Master Poet I thank you so much...for within this light love has bloomed and the warmth of the peace holds us close...niaish my friend White Horse Flying for your kindness


  • arafura gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    You are always very loyal and very loving to your Hetane.

    "I will always love you.
    Niaish my Heméoone niaish"

    Your words leave no room for doubt.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 26, 2008
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      arafura

      Dear John,

      I am loyal to my Hetane and love him dearly...you know my heart and my loyalties to all whom i love and call my friends...Those who know me, know me well and understand what I stand for and believe in...Thank you for being one of them


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    September 25, 2008

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    To have words touch a heart so deeply is outstanding. To create such beauty in the soul is amazing. Both of you have become one in thought, feelings and love. I enjoyed both of these pieces so much. My sister, you have written from your heart and soul, as always.
    Much love to you
    Little White Wolf


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 26, 2008
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      Soulful Woman

      hugs my sister you know me so well and understands this heart that gives completely to those whom she loves...He and I have become one of thought, feelings and love...Thats why I wanted all to see this wonderful man who loves me niaish my sweet Little White Wolf

  • eternal-devotion
    September 25, 2008

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    Truely Beautiful.

    Your tribute to this friend is very heartwarming. A man that is true to his freinds,and is faithful,loyal and defends them is rare these days. Your friend sound like someone very worth getting to know. I am glad to see that you have the words within you to recommend such a person to others. He is the type of person that has and will make this a better world for haveing been in it. His atributes are what makes him so very special not only to you but to all whom he has touched. Both poems are truely beautiful and I truely enjoyed reading them.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 26, 2008
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      eternal-devotion

      Thank you so much kind heart for the beautiful comment He truly is a wonderful man, with a tender careing heart and always willing to take a stand for what he knows is right...I do so wish for all toknow him and to feel his friendship...Thank you again so much


  • airhynne
    September 25, 2008

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    beautiful. I really enjoyed both poems. If you made greeting cards with the first one in it, you'd be a millionaire in no time. Thank you so much for sharing this. I feel so much better after reading it.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 25, 2008
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      airthynne

      awwww! thank you so much for the beautiful thought and so touched it has made you feel better...my friend, each and every word is filled with truth for a man that is so wonderful to so many


  • Katie Lazette
    September 25, 2008

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    A sincere feeling of gratitude and love from the heart from a friend. How wonderful to have such a friend. Thank you for sharing. Katie

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 25, 2008
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      Katie Lazette

      and thank you dear one, for your kind words do mean so much


  • The-whole-truth
    September 25, 2008

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    Very easy rhythm to follow, simple structure helped it to flow and made it an easy read

    well done


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 25, 2008
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      The-whole-truth

      i am pleased you enjoyed it and hopefully left a lasting thought of our Silent Cougar

  • midnightblue1272
    September 25, 2008

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    Bravo.

    Superb words for a fellow poet, my sister. A great tribute, indeed. He should be proud to have you for a Hetane. Good work.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 25, 2008
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      midnigh tblue1272

      thank you kind brother for the sweet and thoughtful words...as you well know he is very special to my heart


  • everyone1 gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    Touching to the last!

    Even flow, and rythm. Heart felt, dubious.

    A pleasure to read, with a message of grace and hope.

    Peace be with you.

    Forever yours to claim.

    ~ James ~

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 25, 2008
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      Jamesleelong37

      thank you kind soul for the sweet comment and very touched you have enjoyed


  • angelflames
    September 25, 2008
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    What a great tribute and description I was fulfilled by the wording here


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 25, 2008
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      angelflames

      i am so touched you could the realness within my words...he is such a wonderful and so kind to everyone...I just love him dearly

  • moonflower
    September 25, 2008
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    what a wonderful description of a true friend!..enjoyed this very much! :

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 25, 2008
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      moonflower

      Thakn you kindly...he is a wonderful friend and so much more to me


  • moon2u
    September 25, 2008
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    What a wonderful tribute to your friend
    nice to meet you
    moon2u


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 25, 2008
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      moon2u

      and very nice to meet you as well and so pleased you have enjoyed my words for this wonderful man who has stolen my heart so completely

  • Roy-rahbar
    September 25, 2008
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    a very true example of a noble person..well written.
    Rahbar.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 25, 2008
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      Roy-rahbar

      A noble man he is my friend and I love him dearly thank you so much for reading~


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    September 25, 2008

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    Superb plus

    Wow, fantastic write. What a wonderful description of, and tribute to a relationship(s). You expressed your thoughts extemely well. Your verbal imagery struck home immediately. For this write applies to many individuals who have given me psychological support over many years of my life; this includes, but is not limited to, some of the worlds greatest writers; philosophers and poets, as well as, teachers; friends and family members. Thank you for sharing this.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 25, 2008
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      Trafalger679Curious

      and thank you so much for this lovly comment and sharing so much with me...I am touched you have enjoyed so much It is so easy to write for him for he is all the wonderful things my poem has said...check him out for yourself, you want be sorry


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    September 24, 2008

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    Nemehotatse my sweet Hemeoone...

    My sweet Hemeoone.
    I am drawn to tears for the love you have shown me.
    Your words lay across my heart
    The honour you bestowed upon me
    Has been nothing less than a blessing
    And every waken day
    I thank destiny for making our paths cross.
    The comments from others below
    Have taken my breath away
    Never have I felt so overwhelmed
    And without you
    I would never had made it this far
    You have given me so much
    And have made me who I am
    And for that
    I will always love you.
    Niaish my Heméone niaish


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 25, 2008
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      Silent Cougar

      you are more than welcome na Hetane na hesta..for each word i have spoken is the truth from my heart that knows it...i shall hold your hand forever and a day

      niaish for being the man you are, for me and all others

      nemehotatse na hetane


  • Angelflower
    September 24, 2008

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    yes! he really does!! thats my tag!! He is a tender person with the fighting spirit of a mighty Cougar... I'm proud to say that I know him.. And I call him friend..

    Angel


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 25, 2008
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      Angelflower

      i am honored little one to have you grace my page, for you know him well and understand the rock he is for us all...a wonderful Hetane, dear friend to all and loyal to any in need...Thank you so much the sweet words

      And the tag Is just awesome, thank you so much


  • SneezyGoldfish
    September 24, 2008
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    This is a lovely tribute and very touching. and sincere,


  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 24, 2008

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    Yes, Tender wolf from what I know of him as my brother he is what you say and all this makes a leader among us as well as the friend he has become to many...Your tribute is well deserved for him, and the sentiment very deeply felt!


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 25, 2008
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      Rose Angel

      Thank you sweet sister for the kind words he is a wonderful man and a wonderful brother to so many like your self...im so touched you could feel the love with which each line was written


  • darkstinger
    September 24, 2008

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    This was a great poem. There are great people out there that want to be friends and support everyone, then you get those that don't. Keep writing.

    Ray


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 25, 2008
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      darkstinger

      thank you kind heart, you are true there are so many who simply dont care enough to be their best but you find with Silent Cougar he is a modern day hero, a true friend and loyal always so pleased you enjoyed...


  • poet-guy17
    September 24, 2008

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    Simple, yet Spectacular

    A great write, kind of motivational from my interpretation. I guess there is a cougar in all of our lives, we just have to determine who he/she is.
    Sorry I wasted a click! I could have just gone straight to your page...
    ~Ľũčąś~


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 25, 2008
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      poet-guy15

      I am honored by your words and thank you kindly for them...im so pleased you found them to your liking...


  • teddybare gold member
    September 24, 2008

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    friendship

    always makes me smile and this an exceptional rhyme.. love the honnor (wich is getting scarce these days) that pulses through out this write.. if only every one still had a simular thought pattern or way of being.. ok now i'm dreamin'.. but any way good write


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 24, 2008
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      teddybare

      thank you very much for the wonderful words of praise..My Silent Cougar is an honorable man so words of love and friendship flows so easy from my heart...dream on dear friend dream on


  • MissyMouse
    September 24, 2008
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    It's a nice work.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 24, 2008
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    so sincere

    as he is a good friend to many and as they are to him...i know he loves it...
    Linda

  • Tecohe
    September 24, 2008
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    An honorable tribute and a good poem. Tecohe


  • lady8
    September 24, 2008
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    Hey great job everyone wants to know someone like that! SC must be honered.

  • SoulWhispher
    September 24, 2008
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    Well Done

    THis is truly a tribute, so well done, he will be so honored for your magic words, blessings John

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 24, 2008
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      SoulWhispher

      thank you John very much for the kind words and very pleased you liked it


  • georgie
    September 24, 2008

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    forever and a day... tis wots engraved on my wedding ring... i loved your poem but the author comments hit me even harder,
    hugs,
    georgie,
    xxx


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 24, 2008
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      georgie

      I am so pleased my words of love have touched you...forever and a day as we both know,means it has no end thank you once again


  • FailuresOfThePast
    September 24, 2008

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    AW! Im sure hes honored that you wrote this about him and I wish you two the best!

    I love the write, its so sweet.

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 24, 2008
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      Silveren DrakenSire

      thank you very much for the kind words and i do believe he liked it as well


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 24, 2008

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    Oh yes indeed he makes a truly wonderful friends and is there whenever he's needed.
    A beautiful dedication Tender Wolf and wonderful graphic that fits perfectly
    WhisperingButterfly xxx


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 24, 2008
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      AliceinPoetryLand

      Thank you sweet soul for the beautiful words of praise for the one we all hold so dear...and yes he is true to the very end...


  • freespirit51
    September 24, 2008

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    BEAUTIFUL AND FULL OF TRUTH.. This is a loving tribute to my Big Brother dear Sister. Every word rings true. Mikey be good big brother and good friend..

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 24, 2008
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      freespirit51

      thank you sweet LittleWind for I know just how dear he really is...


  • SpiritMother
    September 24, 2008
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    A wonderful tribute to someone who deserves to be acknowledged for his giving strengths.
    AHO

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 24, 2008
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      SpiritMother

      niaish so much and yes he does, for his kindness is so far reaching


  • lianonsidhe silver member
    September 24, 2008

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    Superb! It made me think of my own special cougar, Nigel! The imagery and description reminded me of when we first met. Silent Cougar must indeed be a wonderful person to inspire such lovely words. A lovely write. Thank you for sharing.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 24, 2008
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      lianonsidhe

      and thank you for the very sweet comment~ yes he is a wonderful man and dear friend to so many...as i know, your cougar must be as well for you...i am pleased my words have touched you


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    September 24, 2008

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    Awwww, this is so lovely. I hope you two get to spend alot of time together. My hetane just got back on. I hope to spend time with him.


  • Lowell Poe
    September 24, 2008

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    Yes ...I know this brother of ours.
    A good man indeed.
    Kind as he bends to help a child...
    loyal as the heart of hearts.
    A very interesting man.
    What better way to recognize this better then a poem from your soul.
    Beautiful as it stands in the light of your love and admiration for all that is good.
    The background is stirring and simply stunning and appropriate.
    How do we honor what we admire in those we seek to accompany....to emulate....or the joy they bring to us?
    One of the very best ways is our declaration of honor in words....To accomplish this proceeding you need a poet...
    an observer of the universe...
    I could think of no better appointee for this honor then the daughter of nature...the voice of the unspoken ...
    the echo in the minds of the banished....my gypsy sister..and the darlin of my poetic heart....Ann.
    God loves her so I do too.

    PEACE
    MY WANDERING LASS,
    Lowell


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 24, 2008
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      Lowell Poe

      brother of my heart Ten Bears your words do bring me to tears ,as i can feel your tenderness and love...thank you so much!


  • Nature Song silver member
    September 24, 2008

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    What a wonderful poem for Mike! Impressive write for sure. Wonderful dedication to a wonderful man and friend! ~Sie


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 24, 2008
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      Nature Song

      thank you kind soul for the sweet words and you are so right, he is a wonderful man


  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 24, 2008
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    Awesome and so true

    Such a kind hearted man and his poetry is truly awesome as well


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 24, 2008
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      storiesun told

      thank you so much for the sweet words for our wonderful Cougar...he truly is a wonderful friend to so many

  • Angel1002
    September 24, 2008
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    Your poem sounds like love. I like it!

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 24, 2008
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      < Angel1002

      Thats because it is love...forever and a day with him always

  • PureCountry
    September 24, 2008

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    Having Shared

    many words with this brother-warrior, in times of counsel. I can attest to the validity of your thoughts. Your words bring honor to one, who is a stedfast presence in the lives of many.

    Niaish for sharing this offering.

    With Love Always,
    Aenohe


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      September 24, 2008
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      < Silent Hawk

      my son and dear Spirit Guide, I am honored by your words for our Silent Cougar...he has been a rock for so many,teacher, counselor and friend but loved so deeply by manyi am sure he will be touched by your words...niaish

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