Hands resting
on sofa sides,
coveted sabbatical,
thoughts wading
through labyrinth
designed in
heart heavy,
fingers grope
for more,
soul churning
on queries
fathoming ceaselessly.
Silence
mocking peace ?
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie: 30 words only by Rizzie.
370 points, ended September 24, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Love the imagery. I also like how "silence" is a line by itself, creating a natural pause. Nice job.
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i love the images in this great write
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Thank you...
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Good ideas
And as you said thoughts to ponder as the day moves around us,...mac
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yes..sometimes, thoughts just take over....
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