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I was once a flower...


‘…Yes… I was once a flower…’
-I tell everyone who passes by,
With a flowered vase in their hands
And with tempting chocolates,

And I remember… ‘I was once, a flower...’

I was also gift wrapped, like them-
Like these other roses-

Into an ecstasy of meeting her
Like these chocolates-

Wearing golden ornaments
Waiting to be removed, and tasted,

But like a sad flower,

Time chose to pluck me, to count
Count the moments I waited,
All in the temptations-
‘…She’ll be here…sure…
…she won’t be here…sure?...’

And all that remains unsaid
‘…I was once, your flower…’

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 28, 2008

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    Humm..this is an innocent piece bringing the depth and beauty of your heart my friend..thanks for your touching entry...