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A Man

What is a real man?
Your question is true,
the answer is simple...
it's in the deeds that you do.

The look in your eyes,
when you take her hand.
Speaking words of true love,
letting her know where she stands.

Being there when she's down,
wiping the tears from her face.
Giving comfort and hugs,
putting a smile in its place.

Give her the respect she deserves,
encouraging her goals in life.
A real man who can do this...
one day will have a good wife!

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After reading some of your poems I think you already know what a real man is suppose to be like! Stay true!!

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  • Raining Kisses silver member
    October 7, 2008

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    I think women bringing up sons should all have to read this poem, it sums up all the values I have tried to instil in my boys, I think I'll stick a copy on my sons walls very nicely done, simple straight talking and great rhyming thanks for sharing littlefishone


    • darlintlc silver member
      October 7, 2008
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      Thanks for the nice comment! This poem was entered in a contest and got removed for some reason...don't know why I followed the rules but anyway...I'm glad you liked it!


  • siddy jones
    September 25, 2008

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    ha! I like this. I think it should become a law that all men should have to read this....for their own good:] this is really great. good job.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    So very true! You have described exactly how a man should be...every woman should have one A wonderful write, good luck in your contest

    • darlintlc silver member
      September 25, 2008
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      Thanks bunches! How true...we would all be lucky to have someone like that!

      Thanks for reading and the good luck wishes
      darlintlc


  • faderman1959
    September 24, 2008

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    Hopefully every woman in the world finds one like this and keeps them. To often they don't realize what they have before its gone. You have definitely described what a good man should be.

    • darlintlc silver member
      September 25, 2008
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      I guess this was just some of what I believe makes a "good man" in my eyes! How true you speak...when you find a good man you need to hold on to them and treat them as a rare treasure cause you don't find them alot!

      Thanks for reading
      darlintlc

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