Whispers of the trees are heard in tranquility of resting peace
Singing forces of the deceased unite under the moonlight
Demoralizing melodies are eternally encompassed among the dark ghosts of the forgotten
And the tyrant again triumphantly screams through the breeze of melancholic victory
Navy sky of the darkened ambience of these ghastly nights reclaims power,
Obscurity to natural beauty of the woods seeps through fluently to revolutionize
Staggering murky rays strike grounds of solemn solitude;
Liquefied sectors are wrought throughout the kingdom in utter domination
Glimmering moon of the midnight forest stays vivid beyond the leafless branches,
Tyrannical master lurks within shadows observing and battling for administration and survival
Simultaneous dwelling of spiritual forces and the master of tyranny join their visions in darkness
And the moon of dark holding sense of mystery immortally glows in the depths of black
Author notes
Forest View by Tobi_2008 (Flicker.com)
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2350/1551118285_4208937e79.jpg?v=0
A contest entry
- It's All Black and White by Note The Sarcasm.
600 points, ended September 28, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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lovely treasure of a poem..
Please place this GEM in the Group Read list for Gluttons for Punishment
so we may celebrate with you!
GLUTTON SALUTE!
ears/Seattle
favorite verse:
Navy sky of the darkened ambience of these ghastly nights reclaims power,
Obscurity to natural beauty of the woods seeps through fluently to revolutionize
Staggering murky rays strike grounds of solemn solitude;
Liquefied sectors are wrought throughout the kingdom in utter domination
WOW!
ears
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dark, imagery, great
over all it feels dark it has great imagery and i love it ^-^ lol -
This poem is filled with description and the diction in this is well used. Definitely worthy of a trophy beyond all means.
Loved this,
Silvos.
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Congrats on the Silver...this was so full of images, that brooded the darkness and it's many iminities...cleverly written, sis...
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This makes me think of the malevolent side of the spirit of the woods.
Like the "thing" at the end of Evil Dead II.
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The imagry in this was awesome! I really liked it. And the photograph is very cool. It reminds me of where I shot today. Thre's this really old abandoned house near where I live. And by really old, I mean like REALLY old, like no bathroom. Well, it's abandoned, decrept, filled with tons of junk that people just left there, and a great place to take pictures. I'm anxious and excited to develop the film tomorrow. Okay, now I'll stop rambling and I apologize for rambling. This was really awesome. Great write!
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Thanks for your comment
It's okay, I have no problem with listening to people rambling, everything is welcome, in fact I'm pleased that you're enlightening me . Good luck in developing the photographs of the house and the darkness it incorporates (carefull however 
), all the best to you!
~Emily~ xx
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