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Too busy

Children come crying,
mothers too busy to feed,
left alone struggling.

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  • HereComesTheSun
    September 29, 2008
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    wow so short yet so true and sticks to the heart
    great job


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 26, 2008

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    It is heartbreaking knowing just how true this is for the world and innocent children

    Well penned!
    ♥
    Thank You for your entry in Stop Child Abuse - September & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda
    Co-Judge


  • maralisa silver member
    September 24, 2008

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    a very true and touching poem sometimes we are all to busy to care thank you for entering the contest and good luck in the contest