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My wish


            My wish is a wish so wonderful
              You will never feel sorrowful
            Of a palace in the blue sky
            Oh the tall towers and the gleaming walls

            Up in the sky
            Learning how to fly
            Living forever
            With family and friends

            Where every one gets a chance
            To go to school
            To sing, to dance
           
            Playing in the meadow oh so green
            Where I met some new friends
            Like Kessandra and Shereen

            Going in a bus
            Which will take you anywhere
            Like to the North pole
            Where poeple say words like 'sus'

            Where you are spellbound
            By a magic chirping sound

            Tasting the peach
            Which was so,so sweet
            Oh it's so yummy
            Oh it's so chummy
           
            Where bad will be good
            And good will never turn bad
            This is a thing that I think
            Should
                 

            I know it's impossible
            But oh it's too wonderful
            The feeling of great happiness
            Welling inside you



                     

             

Author notes

My best poem Yet. I know, I just made up the word 'sus' up. I am not caring about things like cleaning up.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 25, 2008
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    What a lovely write this is

    Through joy and hope anyone can learn to fly on the wind and run over a rainbow

  • Felixthecat7
    September 25, 2008
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    Thsi is really good
    Keep writing